雅思写作高分句型实例

事实上，剑桥考官的范文中，复杂句的数量寥寥可数，很多时候都是把简单句进行了华丽的包装，下面小编就和大家分享雅思写作考官喜欢的高分句型实例，来欣赏一下吧。

雅思写作考官喜欢的高分句型实例

雅思考官评分标准中最后一项 GRA (grammatical range and accuracy)，明确考察的是学生写英语句子多样性和准确性的能力，即测试考生简单句和复杂句的综合运用能力。

而中国考生也知道句式表达要多样性，但很难参透具体如何操作才能让自己的句子丰富多样，结果是普遍句式比较单一，写到复杂结构时往往就是堆砌各种从句，似乎除了从句再无其它复杂结构可写。

事实上，剑桥考官的范文中，复杂句的数量寥寥可数，很多时候都是把简单句进行了华丽的包装，今天就来看看考官喜欢的“高分句型”是什么样的，和你想象的是不是有差距!

1.状语前置

所谓状语前置就是把状语(副词，介词短语，分词，不定式)放到句首。考官会频繁使用这种语法结构，而很多考生却没有意识，这种句式通过一堆长句子中出现一个小短语，可以让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感，实例如下：

1)

Unfortunately, professionals from other fields who make a much greater contribution to human society, are paid so much

less that it is hard to disagree with the statement.

2)

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills.

3)

Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness.

4)

As a result of media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities.

5)

With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.

2.句中插入短语

和状语前置类似，长句子中间插入一个小短语，可以让句子读起来更轻松灵活。考官实例如下：

1)

This will affect the job market, which, after all, is a key target in any economic plan.

2)

Sports stars and pop stars, for example, are soon replaced by the neat younger, more energetic generation.

3)

So overall, I believe that, attending schools from a young age is good for most children.

4)

Universities, when it is functioning well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as well as professional training

3.倒装句

这种语法现象考生都学过，但往往在作文中忘记或没有意识使用。先看两个例子：

1 )

Parents should spend time on their children. They should also communicate with them.

2 )

We can never lose sight of the significance of education.

这两个句子没有任何错误，但都很单调平淡，如果使用倒装，效果就不一样了。第一句可以用not only t also 句型来改写成倒装句：Not only should parents spent time on their children, they are also advised to interact with them.

第二句可以否定词提前，强调突出“不可忽视”。

On no account/by no means/ in no way/never can we lose sight of the significance of education.

考官范文中的倒装例子并不多，主要体现在以下几种情况中：

1)

Only in this way can this problem be effectively solved.

2)

We can see that not only are there very large differences between these economies-s, but that these gaps are widening.

3)

Strange as it may seem, parents’ attention sometimes hinders students’academic development.

4)

Equally important to success in learning a foreign language is constant attention to details.

考生在平时的语言积累和写作练习中，可以多模仿这几种固定句式，在文章中穿插1-2句倒装句。

雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文

Write about the following topic:

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Model Answer:

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.

Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.

Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文

Write about the following topic:

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.

Do you agree or disagree?

Model Answer:

I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for.

However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the ‘hero’ of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centred and insensitive to others.

Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing nonvirtual experiences is an important part of a child's development that cannot be provided by a computer.

In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.

I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world.

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