雅思写作常见错误分析

雅思写作是一项比较难以提高的的项目，主要是由于词汇语法和逻辑思维都有所差异，那么有哪些写作方式是比较常见的错误呢?下面小编就和大家分享雅思写作常见错误分析,希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。

雅思写作常见错误分析

中式英文

Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

观点模糊态度暧昧

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

偏离主题

Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

语法错误惨不忍睹

Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

过分简单没有重点

Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

用词不当 表达不准

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

意思重复原地踏步

Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

中国俗语胡乱翻译

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

观点武断 态度强硬

Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more.

雅思写作需注意的10个核心准则

Elementary principles of composition

1. Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic

不同的段落构成文章，每个段落仅传递一个观点

2. As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence; end it in conformity with the beginning

规则：每个段落均以主题句开头，并且首尾呼应。

A. the topic sentence comes at or near the beginning;

主题句前置

B. the succeeding sentences explain or establish or develop the statement made in the topic sentence;

段落围绕主题句展开，后面的句子对主题句进行展开解释

C. the final sentence either emphasizes the thought of the topic sentence or states some important consequence.

末尾句或者对主题句进行强调，或者阐述主题句带来的结果。

3. Use the active voice

主动句永远比被动句直接有力

Eg: There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground

= Dead leaves covered the ground. (清晰生动)

Eg: The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired.

= Failing health compelled him to leave college. (简洁有力)

Eg: It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had.

= He soon repented his words. (简洁有力)

4. Put statements in positive form

以肯定的形式表达否定的意思, 避免使用平淡、毫无色彩，犹豫不决和含糊其辞的语言。

Eg：He was not very often on time.

= He usually came late.

Eg: He did not think that studying Latin was much use.

= He thought the study of Latin useless.

Eg: The taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare’s works.

= The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.

5. Omit needless words

删除冗词

Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.

有力的写作一定简洁。

Owing to the fact that

=Since (because)

In spite of the fact that

=Though (although)

Call your attention to the fact that

=Remind you (notify you)

The fact that he had not succeeded

=His failure

6. Avoid a succession of loose sentences

别写流水账，找找语言的逻辑关系，通过who, which, when, where, and while 这些词把句子串起来。

7. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form

Parallel structure 平行结构讲究对称美：内容对等，结构一致。

Eg: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.

Parallel structure: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.

8. Keep related words together

词的位置决定词的关系，所以遵循‘物以类聚’，意思关联紧密的词放在一块。

A: 主谓之间不分割，补充信息需前置

Eg: Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.

Eg: In the fifth book of the Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church. (状语前置，主谓毗邻)

B：关系代词紧随先行词出现

Eg: There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.

Eg: In his eye was a look that boded mischief. (名词look先行，关系词that紧随)

9. In summaries, keep to one tense

总结通常使用现在时态，如果使用过去时，请保持时态一致。

10. Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end

欲擒故纵的圆周句(periodic sentence)中，强调信息后置。

Eg: Four centuries ago, Christopher Columbus, one of the Italian mariners whom the decline of their own republics had put at the service of the world and of adventure, seeking for Spain a westward passage to the Indies as setoff against the achievements of Portuguese discoverers, lighted on America.

Eg: With these hopes and in this belief I would urge you, laying aside all hindrance, thrusting away all private aims, to devote yourselves unswervingly and unflinchingly to the vigorous and successful prosecution of this war.

雅思作文：常用来表达看法与立场的英式短语&句型

Functional Expressions:

Expressing Thoughts and opinions

have mixed views on

(人们)各持不同的看法

实战例句

It has been around fifteen years since the Internet was first introduced into British households but people still have mixed views on whether it is a positive or negative influence on society.

从因特网第一次走进英国家庭到现在已经有将近十五年了，但人们至今关于网络对社会产生的影响究竟是积极的还是消极的仍然意见不一。

常见的反义短语或句型

reach consensus on...

(人们) 对某事达成一致意见

例句

I will be difficult for people to reach a consensus on this issue.

要让人们对这一事件达成统一的意见是十分困难的。

I take the view that..

我所持的看法是……

例句

I take the view that free education should be available to financially needy people.

我所持的看法是应该时那些财务紧张的人们提供免费的教育。

be of the opinion that...

(某人的) 个人意见是 (注意不能遗漏句型中的介词of)

例句

They are of the opinion that morality cannot be legislated.他们的意见是道德是不能由法律来规定的。

be a highly charged issue

是一个引起激辩的话题

实战例句

Euthanasia is a highly charged issue in many European countries.

安乐死在许多欧洲国家都是一个备受争议的话题。

常见的近义短语或句型

ignite fierce debate

引发了激烈的争论

例句

The song's lyrics ignited fierce debate last year.

这首歌的歌词在去年引发了激烈的争论。

be a well-established fact

(某事) 是为人们所共知的事实

例句

It is a well-established fact that very young children learn best by rote.

人们普遮公认低龄儿童更适合通过机械记忆来学习。

The tide of opinion is now running steadily against...

目前的观点普遍倾向于反对……

实战例句

The tide of opinion is now running steadily against the new traffic law.

目前人们的观点普遍倾向于反对新颁布的交通法。

常见近义短语或句型

The majority of people oppose…

多数人反对……

例句

The majority of people oppose the proposed tax reform.

对于提交上去的税制改革方案，多数人持反对意见。

It stands to reason that...

(某现象) 是符合常理的

实战例句

It stands to reason that a child who is constantly criticised will grow up to have no self-confidence.

一个在不断被挑剔的环境中长大的孩子，在成年后会变得毫无自信，这是符合常理的逻辑。

常见近义短语或句型

The concerns that... are well-justified.

对于某事的担心是完全合理的

例句

The concerns that the new law will curtail(削减)NGO (非政府组织)activities are well-justified.

人们关于新法规可能会减少非政府组织活动的担心是完全合理的。

It is an inescapable fact that...

是一个无法回避的事实

实战例句

It is an inescapable fact that some students behave badly and damage the learning environment.

有一些学生行为恶劣并且破坏学习气氛的问题是一个无法回避的事实。

常见近义短语或句型

be unavoidable

是不可避免的

例句

Many people feared that war was unavoidable.

许多人害怕战争最终还是会无可避免地来临。

... be noticeabie

(某种现象) 十分显著

实战例句

The differences between the British and American academic systems are noticeable.

英国和美国的学术体制差别十分显著。

常见近义短语或句型

...be substantial differences

某种差异是本质性的

例句

There were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at various levels.

在不同的级别上，男女人数的比例有着本质性的差异。

The underlying cause of sth. is…

某现象的深层原因是……

实战例句

We should look into the underlying cause of this problem.

我们应该从更深一层去剖析这个问题的原因。

常用联想短语或句型

A fundamental mistake made by sb.is...

某人所犯的根本性错误是...

例句

Their fundamental mistake is to rely too much on technology.

他们所犯的根本性错误就是太过于依赖科技了

下次雅思写作中要表达立场或者看法的话，不愁没法下笔了吧~

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