如何提升雅思写作水平及如何自测

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写作老师经验长谈 如何提升雅思写作水平及如何自测之综述篇

写作老师背景介绍：

中国农大的本科，荷兰ISS or EUR的学费全免研究生(ISS属于EUR的学院，但在发展学的领域完全可以单独拿出来说话)，到2016年教授且只教授写作4年，包括雅思和托福(有机会我们可以再说说雅思和托福在写作的区别和槽点= =)，教出来的学生写作7分的少一些，6.5的一大堆，应该是可以作为一名小小的教师代表进行发言~

好，每次下课之后，来问问题的每个同学都免不了以下的对话：

“老师!你看我还有一个星期/两个星期/一个月的时间了，我能不能拿到作文6分/6.5分/7分!”

然后，基本上我可以一句话给他们打回去：

“要比较稳定的拿到6分/6.5分，你的大小作文加起来写够了20篇/30篇了么?”

“老师，并没有~”

“那就乖乖回去写够了再来问我问题=。=”

好的，那么可能各位要问，写够了20篇真能上6分么?从整体(而不是个例)的角度来看，一般情况下能乖乖的写20篇的同学，对于写作的态度就还算是可以的，而20篇到底花了各位多少时间呢?一共10小时而已。连完整的10小时都不肯给写作还想拿6/6.5/7分，亲你是要上天么~(语法且思维好的同学除外，比如我当年还是学生的时候第一次裸考写作就是6.5，靠的就是语法少错误和比较强的撕逼能力= =)

雅思写作的核心组成元素

从整体来看，整个雅思写作其实一共注重三个大部分，一个是语法，一个是同义改写，一个是逻辑，并且提升难度确实也是语法<同义改写<逻辑。以下详细讲解三大元素的提升之道。点击标题进入。

提升雅思写作水平第一境界--语法篇

提升雅思写作水平第二境界--同义转换篇

提升雅思写作水平第三境界--逻辑篇

雅思写作水平提升之路总结

我们说了这么多东西，其实目的就是一个，你可以看看你距离6.5分的要求还有多远，以及，三个部分，你最缺失的是哪一个部分。从整体(我都是拿大部分的学生为例，因为我自己也是个例外= =)来看，各个分数段差不多是以下的情况组合：

5.5分：

1. 语法比较烂，brainstorming也不太好

2. 用了太多的理由，导致没有拓展

6分：

1. 语法比较烂，但是brainstorming不错

2. 有一定的细节拓展(就例如software你可以举例是office suite里面的word)

6.5分：

1. 语法不错，brainstorming也不错

2. 有一定的细节拓展

7分及以上：

1. 基本不要出语法错误，brainstorming也不错

2. 每个理由都有细节拓展

这是我教这几年来遇到的绝大部分学生的情况总结，还请各位同学看看自己是属于哪一个情况~

接下来我们说说具体的复习情况：

小作文：

乖乖的先抄几遍剑桥小作文的考官范文，动态图推荐范文有剑7T2T1(p53)和剑9T4T1(p101)，前面一篇很简单，后面一篇很黄很暴力，如果你可以成功的把后面一篇给研究透，那么所有的动态图你都可以大笑着甩掉它们~

静态图并没有太好的考官范文，大部分正好都赶上是学生写的= =所以推荐一个混合类的静态图是剑8T1T1(p30)，好好学习考官是怎么做的~

至于流程图or地图题，没有必要先去复习，例如我3月5号考试，那么等2月27号考试结束之后你再去决定要不要看就可以，总的来看几率是25%，也就是说平均一个月一次地图or流程，2015年的分配是8次地图+4次流程，各位可以心里有个数~然后，至于预测小作文类型这东西，基本上是人品+概率的事情，主要还是看各位的真实水平。(rp好的一些同学从来不知道什么叫做地图and流程图。。。)

简单来说一句话：小作文好好搞剑桥考官范文

大作文：

情况比较复杂，可以参照刚才的自测试试看自己最缺失的是哪一个部分然后对症下药。

如果是语法部分不太行，请参照刚才的9个句子，先保证自己不会犯这9个问题。

如果是同义改写部分，请把刚才的5个简单句全部用到你的大作文之中，同时保证前后两句话不要使用相同的主语;短语的部分，可以参照任何老师所给的“同义改写必备词组”or“必备词伙”，但更重要的是，请你在练习作文的时候真的尝试用进去，而不是背完就算了~

逻辑的部分，请认真拿出来14年or15年之中任意一整年的题目进行brainstorming练习，每个题目不超过4分钟即可，一年一共48道题目，所耗费的时间不会太长，但这是大有裨益的~(至于正确答案什么的，我才不会告诉你我正准备再重新整理一下14~15年所有题目的所有能想到且能写出来整体段落的idea~)

至于作文的批改，要看各位的作文欠缺的是什么，如果仅仅是语法不太好，那么上有的是各种外教可以进行语法修改，因为只有语法修改，所以还是可以保证质量的，但如果你欠缺的是行文逻辑，那么还是请你找一位你觉得靠谱的老师，发一篇你觉得你写的不错的文章给他/她看，看看人家有什么意见。如果你给老师发的篇数超过3篇，请记得要给老师红包，因为看作文，特别是仔细看作文，并不是一件轻松的事情......

关于市面上任何一本写作书，每本书都有其各自的优点和缺点，(虽然我心里都有数)但是我不太方便对每本书进行评价(~)，只能说只要是公开出版物，就不要背其中的大作文范文，可以多记记短语，看看别人的brainstorming有哪些想法，但是不要背诵成品作文，除非是老师私下自己写的，没有做成书出版的，那么你可以放心去模仿甚至是去背~

最后，重要的事情说三遍：

乖乖去写作文

乖乖去写作文

乖乖去写作文

雅思写作解题思路之科技与传统的冲突

2014年8月雅思写作预测题目：科技与传统的冲突。When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

支持正方

Modern technology is efficient, whereas traditional ways have low productivity, e.g. cultivating crops

Technological progress is a social trend which is inevitable, e.g. from pigeon mail (飞鸽传书)to telephones to smart-­‐phones, people have kept moving on from old ways of doing things.

支持反方

žž Traditions embody the culture, and the continuation of civilisation highly depends on it. If traditions were abandoned, the corresponding culture disappeared as well, and the world would become a boring whole, e.g. it is hard to imagine a Chinese that does not celebrate Spring Festival, so does an American who forget about Thanks Giving. 政府资助语言保护

(语言中体现传统 ，很多传统电机都是由语言作为载体进行传承的 ，无论是文字的还是口头的 。);政治家与科学家，孰重孰轻(政治家制定政策保护传统文化)

Tradition is the origin of literally all technological innovation, e.g. from rope knot count (结 绳计数) to math to calculation to modern computing science. In other words, technology is merely the other facet (另一面) of tradition.

An interesting thought is that we can use technology to protect and even promote tradition,

e.g. the productions of shadow play (皮影戏) are too old to fascinate people nowadays, especially the younger generation. Instead of giving up this unique form of art and watching ‘Britain’s Got Talents’, some people have decided to revive it by employing modern script writing and filming techniques to make it popular again. 科技进步的利弊;政治家与科 学家，孰重孰轻(科学家研发的科技有利于传统的保护)

论据共享题

政府资助语言保护

Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out. Others think it waste of financial resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

科技进步的利弊

Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable contribution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

政治家与科学家，孰重孰轻

Some people think politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

雅思写作思路之明天重要还是今天重要

2014年8月雅思写作预测题目：明天重要还是今天重要。An American film actor John Wayne once said “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life”. How important it is for individual and government to think about the future rather than focus on the present?

支持正方

Tomorrow should not and must not be foregone. For example, The Chinese government is currently phasing out its manufacturing industries which are energy-­‐consuming and inefficient. Instead, the government is carrying out a series of actions and sparing no effort to bring up promising industries, e.g. new energy source, so as to ensure its sustainable development.

Tomorrow is the designer of today. Take myself as an example, as a student whose life remains most in the blue print, I dream of becoming a useful person to my country one day. However, I find my current ability rather inadequate to realise such ambition. Thus I finally made my decision to live fully the present and to be hardworking on my admission to a prestigious oversea university, so that I may gain the chance of getting further education.

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There is no doubt today is a most precious moment of life, which is why it is called “the present”—the gift of life to us. It is the lesson we took today that makes the compass for tomorrow, and it is the painstaking work we carry out today that paves the way for tomorrow’s journey. In other words, the future ends in a deserted present.

雅思写作辩证题解题思路之独善其身

2014年8月雅思写作预测题目：独善其身。Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who needs help in the world, so we should be only concerned about our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?.现提供本篇雅思写作解题思路供大家参考。

雅思写作辩证题解题思路之支持反方

Some countries are trapped in domestic troubles, let alone lend a hand to other countries,

e.g. the civil war in Congo and starvation as well as water shortage in South Sudan.

A big proportion of international aids are abused by the government and authorities of many underdeveloped countries, causing hopeless corruption.

A good many international aids are devils in angel’s clothing (穿着天使外衣的恶魔), e.g. special funds are offered with strict strings attached (严苛的附加条件), such as taking charge of local resources & intervening domestic policy.

雅思写作辩证题解题思路之支持正方

ive in the same world, therefore it is our responsibility to give a hand to those who need help.

Butterfly effect: deforestation in Amazon will eventually lead to the degrading of air quality of New York.

Mutual help enhances international friendship and even eliminate hostility, e.g. Turkey’s help when Greece suffered from earthquake, China’s aid after the Tsunami in Japan.

It cannot be overlooked that ubiquitous international mutual assistance is no better than a fine wish, and reality nevertheless does not allow the happening of it. Old saying has it that dreams are always fertile, but reality simply remains barren (老话说得好：理想都是

丰满的，现实都是骨感的); it is the compromise of the two that makes who we are, human.

Thus, I would like to pin down on the realistic side of this issue; meanwhile it is crucial

_that only true aids are offered and countries develop themselves without harming others’ benefits .

论据共享题

经济援助还是行动援助

Developing countries require international organization’s help. Some people think financial aids are better while others believe practical aid and advice make more sense. Discuss and give your opinion.

同套路题

动物园

Zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

动物实验

Some people think it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. Others, however, think it's not right to do that. Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion.

保护濒危动物还是救助地球人

There are many animal species extinct today. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

特殊群体是否应该在大学录取时获得特殊待遇

Some groups, such as poor people and people from rural areas, think universities should make it especially easy for them to get access to university education. To what extent do

you agree or disagree?

助健康的人还是救垂危的人

Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

环境与经济发展的矛盾

Some people think pollution and damage of environment are resulted from a country developing and becoming richer, and this is hard to be avoided. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

雷同题

Some people believe charities should give aid to those in greatest need, wherever they live. Others think charities should better concentrate on helping people who live in their own countries. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.