托福写作避免空洞词汇和重复啰嗦是关键

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托福写作如何提升考官阅读体验?避免空洞词汇和重复啰嗦是关键

托福作文词汇应选择使用不空洞的词

1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

托福写作中应尽量减少重复啰嗦

1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更简洁的表达方式为：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

托福写作语料库积累：关于饮食

托福写作语料库

健康饮食的重要性 ：

鼓励健康饮食习惯：encourage healthy eating habits ,

保持体形：keep fit,

集中注意力：concentrate/focus on; 容易分散注意力：get easily distracted

营养：nutrient, 特定的维生素：certain vitamins;

油腻的垃圾食品不含孩子成长所需的必要维生素，这样孩子无法在学习中集中注意力,因此学校应该鼓励健康饮食。

Greasy junk food lacks certain vitamins for the healthy development of the children, and students without sufficient healthy food might suffer from lack of concentration on their study and they get easily distracted, thus school should encourage healthy eating habit.

垃圾食品：junk food, French fries, hamburgers;

高热量：with high carbs, 油腻：greasy;

儿童肥胖：child obesity;

摄入过多的高热量垃圾食品会导致儿童肥胖。

It is really important for the school to encourage healthy eating habits, and junk food like French fries and hamburgers alike should be banned in schools. Too much junk food with high carbs leads to childhood obesity.

健康食品 ：

海鲜类： salmon， tuna, shrimp

水果类：fruits such as berries, apples, cherries, pineapple, oranges, frozen grapes, watermelon, cantaloupe,

蔬菜类：Vegetables - broccoli, carrots, cherry tomatoes, potatoes and sweet potatoes

高蛋白质低热量：high in protein low carbs

非常好的结合：a wonderful combination

学校应该提供蔬菜和水果等低热量高维生素的食品。

School should offer students a variety of healthy food and snack ranging from vegetables to different kinds of fruit. Like broccoli, carrots, cherry tomatoes, and apples, cherries, pineapple are also good choices. They are low in carbs, and vitamin rich.

通过适当的教育学生会做出更好的饮食决策：

Hopefully, with proper education, students can make appropriate eating choices.

既然学生可以摄取合理的营养，他们会更加集中注意力也会保持好的体形。

Since students are getting the proper nutrients, they will concentrate better on their study and also they will be more fit.

托福写作词汇积累

支持前/后种观点的人

people / those in favor of the former/ latter opinion4 }

有/提供如下理由/证据

have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence

在一定程度上

to some extent/ degree / in some way

理论和实践相结合

integrate theory with practice

……必然趋势

an irresistible trend of…

日益激烈的社会竞争

the increasingly fierce social competition

眼前利益

immediate interest/ short-term interest

长远利益

interest in the long run

有其自身的优缺点

has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

扬长避短

Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

取其精髓，取其糟粕

Take the essence and discard the dregs

对……有害

do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

交流思想/情感/信息

exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

跟上……的最新发展

keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …

采取有效措施来……

take effective measures to do sth….

……的健康发展

the healthy development of …

有利有弊

Every coin has its two sides…

没有什么事物是完美的

No garden without weeds

对……观点因人而异

Views on …vary from person to person

重视

attach great importance to…

社会地位

social status

把时间和精力放在……上

focus time and energy on…

扩大知识面

expand one’s scope of knowledge

身心两方面

both physically and mentally

有直接/间接关系

be directly / indirectly related to…&

经济的快速发展

the rapid development of economy

人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长

the remarkable improvement / steady growth of people’s living standard

先进的科学技术

advanced science and technology

面临新的机遇和挑战

be faced with new opportunities and challenges

人们普遍认为

It is commonly believed/ recognized that…

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