托福口语高分学霸答题思路实例对比讲解

很多同学对于能在托福口语中拿到高分的学霸都很佩服，有时候可能也会觉得纳闷，为什么同样的一道题，人家就能说得比我更好想得比我更全面深刻呢?今天小编给大家带来了托福口语高分学霸答题思路实例对比讲解,希望能够帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。

托福口语高分学霸答题思路实例对比讲解

托福口语高分学霸答题思路对比分析

例题：

If a foreign friend of yours is visiting your city. Which part of town would you recommend him or her to see? And why?

普通考生答案：

If a foreign friend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden because of the following reasons. First, there are many charming buildings. Some of them were even designed and built like a 100 years ago. Second, there are many local restaurants around and my friend can taste different kinds of delicious food. Last but not least, the place in the center of my town and the transportation to get there is very convenient. To sum up, If a foreign friend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden.

为什么这个答案得不了高分?

1. 开头重复原题的句子是一个安全但是比较被动的做法。学霸的答案是要体现出主动而自然的表达;

2. 中间的三个理由貌似比较充分但实际上每个理由都存在扩展不充分的问题，结果变成了理由的罗列。学霸的答案重点不是在理由的数量(很多题目在15秒职能想到一个理由)，而是在理由的细节扩展上;

3. 结尾的总结貌似让整个答案更加完整，但实际上只是对主题句的完全重复，没有任何意义上的功能。学霸的答案一般会把宝贵的时间花在陈述真正有意义的内容上，即使是总结也需要用更多样化的语言;

4. First/second/lastnot not least/to sum up这些过渡语表面上让整个答案有逻辑，实际上会让评分者认为答题者在使用准备好的答题模板，导致被压分。学霸的答案是采用更佳自然的过渡。

所以，学霸的答案应该是这样的：

I’ll be happy to show my foreign friend the YU Garden which is a beautiful old community loaded with local culture.

For one, the architecture there is amazing. I mean some of the buildings were designed and constructed like more than 100 years ago and those can give you a really good sense of history and ancient local culture, the gigantic stone gate decorated with nice-looking patterns,the delicate wooden roof painted with colorful pictures. You name it .

Also,tons of local restaurants brings another reason to be there. You can find almost all kinds of local snacks which can never be found anywhere else.

Isn't that the perfect place for a foreign friend?

托福口语中的语法错误如何避免

我们一起来看下面的例子：

My teacher gave interesting assignments andmotivating the students.

很显然，这属于混用语法结构的一个典型错误。这会使句子产生歧义：难道是说My teacher gave interesting andmotivating assignments to the students? 因为本句中interesting和motivating 是平行结构. 或者是My teachergave interesting assignments and motivated thestudents? 因为亦可以理解成gave和 motivated是平行结构.所以错误使用语法会带来许多意想不到的麻烦。

当我们重复使用一个短语或单词的时候，不仅会给人以词汇量过小的感觉，有时甚至也会造成误解。我们来看一个例子：

My teacher wrote the assignment on the chalkboard. The assignment was on thechalkboard until the teacher erased the assignment after we had all done the assignment.事实上这句话的观点会更加清晰，如果我们将重复的词替换为其他表达的话。我们再来看看改进后的表达：

My teacher wrote the assignment on the chalkboard. She erased the board after we had allcompleted the task.

其中 assignment 被替换为 task; teacher 变为了she; chalkboard 被改为了board. 不但句子显得更加生动活泼不刻板，信息量也比原来要多了。

避免托福口语语法的典型错误，能够做到举一反三，灵活应用，相信托福口语考试中的其他问题就能迎刃而解了。

好习惯注定托福口语高分

1. 每天坚持练习口语一两个小时，锻炼你说英文的肌肉习惯

2. 养成大声读英文的习惯，再尝试着用腹式一口气练习，这样使你说出的英文更有底气，更流畅。

3.每天早晨起床后，张大嘴，啊五分钟，这样有利于练好你的腹式一口气。

4. 养成每天去运用的习惯，学过了很多东西，要经常拿出来晒太阳，要学会卖弄英文，你可以找Partner ,也可以对着天空，大树，小鸟对话，只要把这些语言运用自如了，变成你自己的了，什么都好!

5. 学会正确使用复读机，先精听，然后去读，去听自己的发音，找出与磁带录音的不同，直到自己的发音与磁带的发音一样了，再接着听下一个。

6. 要有专一的精神，不要两天学美式的，两天学英式的，我们说这两种发音都挺好的，所以，你喜欢哪种就模仿哪种，而且要保证你所模仿的材料从始到终几乎是那一种发音。

7. 要敢说英文，不要怕犯错。记住：在你用正确的方法练习之后，你犯的错越多，凭着语感纠正的错误也越多，进步也就越大!学习外语的好习惯。

8. 老师，我每天都模仿了一个小时，可以已经十天了，还是读不好。

做得很好，习惯是养成的，只要你用正确的方法去模仿，每天坚持去模仿就是一种好习惯，当然，并不是说我模仿一个小时，发音就能跟磁带一模一样，而是每模仿一次就会进步一点点，这只是时间的问题，也许第十一天，第十二天，就读好了呢?最重要的是你坚持每天去模仿，养成一天不模仿就浑身难受的好习惯!

9. 每天找人去运用，学一句用一句的好习惯，语言的学习是边模仿边练习，边运用。不能说等我学好了会说了才去说，而是能说几句就说几句，几天说一句比十年说不出几句要强得多 。

10. 每天坚持复习的好习惯，学过的东西不能丢了，要每天都复习，把练习过的句子拿出来做口译。

同学们除了坚持执行好以上10大习惯，还应该时刻关注自己的学习进度，充分了解自己的英语口语水平，在一段时间的学习后给自己做测试，如果有所进步就该保持现在的学习方式，反之就应该检讨一下自己还有哪些不足之处，考虑是否应该改变学习方式。

托福口语之“生病”的表达方式

(1)一般病情：

He feels headache, nausea and vomiting. (他觉得头痛、恶心和想吐。)

He is under the weather. (他不舒服，生病了。)

He began to feel unusually tired. (他感到反常的疲倦。)

He feels light-headed. (他觉得头晕。)

She has been shut-in for a few days. (她生病在家几天了。)

Her head is pounding. (她头痛。)

His symptoms include loss of appetite, weight loss, excessive fatigue, fever and chills. (他的症状包括没有食欲、体重减轻、非常疲倦、发烧和发冷。)

He feels exhausted or fatigued most of the time. (他大部份时间都觉得非常疲倦。)

He has been lacking in energy for some time. (他感到虚弱有段时间了。)

He feels drowsy, dizzy and nauseated. (他觉得昏昏欲睡，头晕目眩和想吐。)

He feels as though everything around him is spinning. (他感到周围的东西都在打转。)

He has noticed some loss of hearing. (他发觉听力差些。)

She has some pains and itching around her eyes. (她眼睛四周又痛又痒。)

(2) 伤风感冒：

He has been coughing up rusty or greenish-yellow phlegm. (他咳嗽带有绿黄色的痰。)

His eyes feel itchy and he has been sneezing. (他眼睛发痒，而且一直在打喷嚏。)

He has a fever, aching muscles and hacking cough. (他有发烧，筋骨酸痛和常常咳嗽。) (hacking = constant)

He coughed with sputum and feeling of malaise. (他咳嗽有浓痰，而且觉得很虚弱。) (malaise = debility)

He gets a cold with a deep hacking cough. (他伤风咳嗽。)

He has a headache, aching bones and joints. (他头痛，骨头、关节也痛。)

He has a persistent cough. (他不停地在咳。) 或

He has bouts of uncontrollable coughing. (他一阵阵的咳嗽，难以控制。)

He has hoarse and has lost his voice sometimes. (他声音嘶哑，有时失声。)

He has a sore throat and a stuffy nose. (他嗓子疼痛而且鼻子不通。)

His breathing is harsh and wheezy. (他呼吸时，有气喘似的呼哧呼哧作响。)

He has a stabbing pain that comes on suddenly in one or both temples. (有时突然间太阳穴刺痛。)

He has a runny nose, sneezing or a scratchy throat. (他流鼻水，打喷嚏和喉咙沙哑。)

(3) 手脚毛病：

His both hands and feet ache all over. (他两手两脚都很酸痛。)

He has pain on the sole of his feet. (他脚底很痛。)

There is a wart-like lump on the sole of right foot. (我右脚底有个像肉疣般的硬块。)

His ankles look puffy and they pit when he presses them with his finger. (他的足踝好像肿了，用手按，就有小坑痕。) (pit = small dent form)(句里的 they 和 them 都是指 ankles)

The pain in his left foot is accompanied by redness and swelling. (左脚酸痛，并有红肿。)

The joints near his fingernails and knuckles look swollen. (指头和指节旁边的关节，似乎有肿大。)

He has numbness and tingling in his hands and fingers. (他的手和指头感到麻木和刺痛。)

His legs become painful following strenuous exercise. (激烈运动后，他的腿就痛。)

His knee is misshapen or unable to move. (他的膝盖有点畸形，也不能动。)

There are some swellings in his armpit. (他的腋窝肿大。)

He is troubled with painful muscles and joints. (他的筋骨和关节都痛。)

She is troubled by the pains in the back and shoulders. (她的后背和肩膀都痛。)

His knee has been bothering him for some time. (他的膝盖不舒服，已有一段时间了。)

(4) 睡眠不好：

He is sleeping poorly.(他睡不好)

He has difficulty in sleeping, inability to concentrate.(他不易入睡，也难集中精神。)

It is usually hard for her to fall asleep when she goes to bed at night.(她晚上就寝，很难入睡。)

He wakes during the night or early morning and finds it difficult to fall asleep again.(他晚间或清早醒来后，再也不能入睡。)

He has nightmares occasionally.(他有时做噩梦。)

5) 呼吸方面：

His breathing has become increasingly difficult.(他呼吸越来越困难。)

He has to breathe through his mouth.(他要用口呼吸。)

He is short of breath, even when he has not been exercising, he is breathless.(他喘气;即使不运动，他也是上气不接下气。)

His cough is more like wheezing.(他的咳嗽有呼哧呼哧的响声。)

His cough is dry, producing no phlegm.(他是干咳，没有痰。)

He has coughed up blood.(他咳嗽有血。)

His nose stuffed up when he had a cold.(他感冒时鼻子就不通。)

He coughs up a lot of phlegm (thick spit) on most days.(他多半时间咳出浓浓的痰。)

He has a feeling of tightness in the chest or a feeling that he is suffocating.(他胸部觉得闷闷的，好像透不过气来。)

(6)口腔毛病：

He has pain in his teeth or jaw. (他的牙齿和下巴疼痛。)

He has some problems with his teeth. (他牙齿有问题。)

The tooth hurts only when he bites down on it. (他咬东西时，牙齿就痛。)

His gums are red and swollen. (他的牙床红肿。)

His tongue is red and sore all over. (他的舌头到处红和痛。)

His breath smells bad and he has a foul taste in his mouth. (他口里有怪味。)

His gums do bleed. (他牙床有出血。)

He has some sore swellings on his gum or jaw. (他的牙床和下巴肿痛。)

He has sore places on or around the lip. (他的嘴唇和周围都很痛。)

There are cracks at the corners of his mouth. (他的嘴巴角落破了。)

There are some discolored areas inside on his tongue. (他舌头里边有些地方颜色怪怪的。)

(7) 肠胃毛病：

He has a bloated, uncomfortable feeling after meal. (他饭后肚子觉得胀胀的，很不舒服。) 或

He feels bloated after eating.

He has bouts of abdominal pain. (他有一阵阵的肚痛。)

He feels bloated in his abdominal area. (他感到肚子胀胀的。)

The pain is mainly in the lower (upper) right part of the abdomen. (痛是在肚子下半部。)

He has nausea and vomiting. (他有恶心和呕吐。)

It is difficult or painful for him to swallow. (他吞下食物时会痛。)

He has passed more gas than usual. (他放…比平常多。)

He has been constipated for a few days. (他便秘了好几天。)

He suffers pains when he moves his bowels. (他大便时很痛。)

He has some bleeding from his rectum. (他的肛门出血。)

He has noticed some blood in his bowel movements. (他发觉大便时有些血。)

His bowel movements are pale, greasy and foul smelling.

or

His bowel movements are grey (or black) in color. (他的大便呈灰白色。)

He has trouble with diarrhea. (他拉肚子。)

(8) 血压等等：

His blood pressure is really up. (他的血压很高。)

High blood pressure is creeping up on him.

He has noticed frequent urination, increased thirst and unexpected tireness. (他发觉常常小便，非常口渴和更加疲倦。)

It is a chest pain that gets worse when he bends over or lies down. (他弯腰或躺下时，胸部更痛。)

He has noticed excessive sweating and unexplained tireness. (他体会到过度的出汗和难以解释的疲倦。)

He has a sharp pain in one area of his spine. (他的脊椎某部位刺痛。)

He has pain in other joints including hip, knee and ankle. (其它关节疼痛包括臀部、膝盖和脚踝。)

His eyes seem to be bulging. (他的眼睛觉得有点肿胀。)

He has double vision. (他的视线有双重影子。)

He feels there is a film over his eyes. (他觉得眼里有种薄膜似的东西，挡住视线。)

His vision in the right eye blurred. (他右眼视线模糊不清。)

He has had some earaches lately. (他近来耳朵有点痛。)

He has a repeated buzzing or other noises in his ears. (他耳朵常有嗡嗡的声音)