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雅思小作文里的大智慧之活用简单词拿高分

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其实人们对于“妖怪”形象的认识与我们对于“雅思图表小作文”的正确认识有着异曲同工之处。下面小编就和大家分享雅思小作文里的大智慧,来欣赏一下吧。

雅思小作文里的大智慧:活用简单词拿高分

词;那么对于词汇的要求是不是降低了?答案当时是“No”.而是我们的词汇需要“灵性”了。

我们一起来看看评分标准中9分档对于词汇的要求——use a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as “slips”. “natural and sophisticated control of lexical resources of lexical features”即“自然使用并且掌握词汇特征”,词汇的高分不是来源于“又难又专的高大上”而是 “妖怪一般的灵性”。这也就是为什么有的时候你的全文用了7,8种变化多端的“占据”相关表达、或者用了更多的“上升、下降”但是分数却不见本质性改变的根本原因。下面让我们通过剑桥雅思7 Test4的一篇考官范文来发现其中的奥秘吧。

The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.

妖怪1:double,triple这一类型的词汇体现出了更为形象的数值本身的变化,比单纯的“上升、下降更为准确”,同时又比“上升,下降+数值”更加简洁。准确而且简洁的表达完全可以称的上是 “natural and sophisticated control of lexical resources of lexical features”的境界

In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.

妖怪2: produce, supply这些简单的动词是与“能量”对应数值最恰当的搭配方式,并不是我们经常记忆的那些“占据”,因此小作文中我们将常会遇到考察的描述对象可能是“能量”或者“食品的销量”,与这些最合适的搭配应该是这些“灵气满满”的动词 produce,supply或者是 buy,sell,consume

In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.

妖怪3:A be matched by B 即A=B

妖怪4: contribute=produce

妖怪5:develop ,某一个描述对象所对应的数值变得更主导了,我们可以用develop 写出这里所呈现的正向发展

Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.

妖怪6:rely on,depend on 表达的是“使用量大”的终极总结。

这些词汇其实大家在接触,account for,constitute,之前早已掌握,只是还没有发现他们在小作文中的天然用途吧,从今天起,这些词汇也出现在你的文章中把,让考官惊叹一下,原来我们的文章中也会出现这些灵动的词汇小妖怪!

雅思写作常用词汇总:交通类

交通类

1.automobile industry 汽车工业

2.boost the economic development 促进经济发展

3.levy the tax 征税

4.modernization 现代化

5.be viewed as … 被视为是…

6.be concerned about … 对…担忧/关注…

7.pollution-free fuel 无污染燃料

8.luxury 奢侈品

9.chronic lead poisoning 慢性铅中毒

10.fill… with … 使…充斥着

11.popularization of cars 汽车普及

12.lay more emphasis on… 把重心放在…

13.observe traffic regulations 遵守交通规则

14.break traffic regulations 违反交通规则

15.get struck in traffic 遇上堵车

16.rush hour 上下班高峰时间

17.ease the traffic pressure 缓解交通压力

18.pedestrian 行人

19.pavement 人行道

20.zebra crossing 斑马线

21.overspeed 超速行驶

22.bottleneck 交通堵塞地区

23.settle down effective laws 制定出积极有效的法律

24.impose restrictions on … 对…实施限制

25.short-sighted 目光短浅的

26.non-renewable resources 不可再生资源

27.carbon dioxide 二氧化碳

28.a pillar industry 支柱产业

29.make full use of … 充分利用

30.road networks 公路网

31.speed limits 限速

32.enhance the quality of life 提高生活质量

33.pay a heavy price 付出惨痛的代价

34.promote the development of relative industries 促进相关产业发展

35.traffic engineering 交通运输工程

36.the number of car ownership 汽车拥有量

37.call for … 需要…

38.overcrowded 过度拥挤的

39.violator 违规者

40.headache 令人头痛的事

41.traffic accidents 交通事故

42.head-way 进展

43.conflict with … 与…相冲突

44.major cause 主要原因

45.be replaced by … 被…所取代

46.provide convenience for … 为…提供便利

47.curb… 限制…

48.dilemma 进退两难

49.encourage somebody to do something鼓励某人去做某事

50.energy-saving 节能的




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