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雅思口语题库话题7分高分范文之梦想中的家(dream house)

Describe your dream house

You should say:

where it is

what it is like

when you want to live there

and explain why you like it

1.适用人群:女生

2.主题:城堡

3.故事线:梦想住在一座豪华的城堡,享受皇室女王的生活。

If I were a billionaire and had the money, I would love to rent or buy a castle for my own royal lifestyle.

Ever since I was a kid, I’ve always wanted to become a princess and live in a castle which looks like one in a fairy tale, or like Windsor Castle in England. So living in the castle will be able to fulfill my childhood dreams.

Anyway, my castle looks very antique from outside, but extremely graceful and appealing with a brook dancing beside the border wall. Into a wall, a large scrolled gate was set, and above the gateway was an ornate arch over-run with friendly ivy. The castle spackles in the sunlight with some huge beautiful, magnificent gardens and the picturesque countryside surrounded it.

The most interesting thing when I live in a castle is that I could experience a royal life and be served like a queen. Wearing a gorgeous dress and a dazzling crown on my head, enjoying a plenty of delicious and distinctive food which are made by profound chefs, walking in the marvelous beautiful gardens, I could live life to the full. There are plenty of rooms that my family and friends could shuttle in together. Also, collecting conventional arts is my hobbies, having an exhibition and enjoying every traditional detail in the castle would be a very fascinating experience.

4.口语高分语料

地道用词:fulfill my childhood dreams

Into a wall

shuttle in

动词叠用: Wearing a gorgeous dress and a dazzling crown on my head, enjoying a plenty of delicious and distinctive food which are made by profound chefs, walking in the marvelous beautiful gardens......

高分句型: collecting conventional arts is my hobbies, having an exhibition and enjoying every traditional detail in the castle would be a very fascinating experience.

雅思口语话题原创范文之梦想中的家Describe your dream house

Describe your dream house

You should say:

where it is

what it is like

when you want to live there

and explain why you like it

适用人群:全适用

主题:乡野别墅

故事线:一座有室内瀑布,花园和巨大图书馆的乡野别墅。

We all as humans dream fancy about our houses. So, there are some who want all the luxuries in their house while some prefer living close to nature. I want my house to be a mimic of nature. So, I want a small waterfall in my house wherein I can take bath and then I want my house to have lot of flowers and be surrounded by trees. So, that in the evening when I wish to sit down, I should feel calm and serene from inside.

Then I want my house to have a library as well. Library of the books that I have already read, so it will be more like a collection of books that I love and could offer others to read and in the library there will be my study table and in one corner will be the place where I could look out of window and see the entire nature at its best and have something to drink or relax. There will be part of my house, where I will allow anyone to come in and sleep over and have food just for free. Because, I want people to travel and travel with entire safety. With nothing to worry I want them to explore this beautiful world.

Also, in my house I wish to have a beautiful field wherein I could go for jogging or play some games. I don’t wish for the most expensive house in the world but I wish for the house that is the most special for me.

4.口语高分语料

地道用词:living close to nature

a mimic of nature

explore this beautiful world

go for jogging

高分句型: so it will be more like a collection of books that I love and could offer others to read and in the library there will be my study table and in one corner will be the place where I could look out of window and see the entire nature at its best and have something to drink or relax.

雅思口语part2不可忽视两细节

雅思口语part2不可忽视两细节之一、肢体语言

其中最重要的就是eye contact(眼神交流)。敢于与考官四目相对是自信的体现,也是交流的基本条件。把考官当作朋友,把Part 2的独白自然的“讲”给他听,而不是自顾自的“表演”。讲的同时关注对方,通过眼神的交流可以知道听者是否理解,是否有疑惑,从而及时作出调整保证交流的有效。如果缺乏了这种眼神的互换,只顾自己说,说错了,考官听不清了都无从知晓,分数也就因而失去了。我们很多考生也知道这一点,只不过做不到。一看到考官的眼睛就紧张。这里可以采取的一个小方法是试着去看考官的额头或鼻子,由于距离较近,考官会有错觉认为你是在看他眼睛。

雅思口语part2不可忽视两细节之二、连贯性用语

眼神的交流对口语考试只能起到辅助的作用,内容更为重要。怎么样在个人独白的过程中体现交流?那就需要连贯性用语。这不仅是有效交流的利器,还能降低Part 2任务的难度。举例说明如下:

以Describe a city 为例。考生A的回答:Beijing is a large city. It is the capital of China. Beijing has many tourist attractions, such as, the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and the Summer Palace. Beijing Roast Duck is very delicious. Peking Opera is amazing. Beijing successfully held the 2008 Olympic Games. …

RAFLE专家点评:该考生的确给出了关于一个城市的较多信息,但是表达十分生硬,片面追求答案只会给自己增加难度,其结果往往是吞吞吐吐,断断续续,最后因为所给的每句答案都过于简短直接因而还撑不满一分钟就无话可说了。即使考试的时候能够将这段话几乎无停顿地流利顺畅地讲出来并且还给出了足够的信息讲满了一分钟(基本上不可能,除非考前准备过),那么听起来也绝对像是背书,考官会猜疑答案是“记熟”的。相反,如果多一些连贯性用语那么结果就大不一样了。

看考生B的回答:OK, the city I am going to talk about is Beijing. Well, as you may probably know, it is a large city. And um, it is the capital of China. I suppose if I had to describe Beijing, the first thing I would say is that it offers tourists so many wonderful places to go, you know, the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and uh, of course, the Summer Palace. Another reason to visit Beijing is the Roast Duck, which is really, really delicious. I am sure you are gonna love it! Also, you can’t miss the Peking Opera. It’s amazing!...

RAFLE专家点评:考生B还未将A 列的信息点都讲完就已经明显在篇幅上胜出了。这要归功于连贯语(划线处)的使用,不仅内容显得更丰富了,表达方式也更自然了,条理似乎也清晰了,这才是交流。

总之,要想口语考试中取得好的成绩,交流这一细节不容忽视。间或的眼神交流,自然的连贯词的使用,语调的适当变化都是辅助交流的必要手段,也是口语考试的制胜法宝。

雅思口语低分八点原因要注意

1、60%的考生,因"表情"被扣分(备注:本文所列百分比和其他评分数据,仅代表部分专家经验,并非官方统计数据)

在雅思口语评分标准的"发音"评分项中,有这样一个界定:"能够使用表情、肢体语言帮助自己被理解。"根据这个标准,如果你有下列问题,你会被扣分:

(1) 几乎不看考官,可能被扣0.2分。

(2) 虽然看着考官,但是表情和口语答案并不配套。

(3) 因为考官面无表情,你原先勉强保持的微笑逐渐僵硬,直至像考官一样面无表情,这样,你可能被扣0.05分。

为了不被扣分,建议各位考生这样做:

(1) 在备考阶段,一定要注意"表情和语言配套"!

(2) 在实际考试的时候,无论你紧张与否,无论考官是否面无表情,请你脸上保持微笑,哪怕很生硬。

2、70%的考生,因"舌头"被扣分

笔者最为纳闷的是:众多中国考生,明明知道"不伸

3、90%的考生,因"单字不重音"被扣分

遇到"单字重音",你必须把那些单词放慢、加重,原因很简单,在整个句子当中,只有这些单词,才是最重要的,其他单词,都要轻读。

在雅思的"发音"评分标准中,有这样一个界定:"考生会使用重读、弱读,使自己更容易被理解。"而我们多数中国考生,仅仅把重读理解为一个单词里的重音音节,而不能把重音理解为"一个句子中的重音单词",所以自然要被扣分了。

4、90%的考生,只使用"单"词,而不使用"词串"

不会使用"词串"的考生,得分一定会被扣0.5-1分。事实上,不会"词串"恰恰是中国考生的致命伤,它除了影响了词汇分,还影响了流利分和速度分。

5、99%的考生,只使用"一种语法",而不使用"多种语法"

多数中国考生,只使用单一的语法结构,即主谓宾结构,而很少使用多种语法,如被动语态、强调句、虚拟语态、疑问句、感叹句等,因为中国考生本性"含蓄害羞",最喜欢用平铺直叙的陈述句,而很少表情丰富地使用疑问句、感叹句、强调句等。我们只能说,只有稍微改变自己害羞的个性,才有可能操练起多种语法,

6、99%的考生,只使用"一层结构",而不使用"多层结构"

多层结构答题法对于中国考生并非易事,因为很多中国考生在应试教育的荼毒下,根本就没有形成自己的思维逻辑,遇到问题只能凭借脑子里仅有的一点知识,胡乱说两句。要想熟练掌握多层答题法,最好的方法应该是选择一个高质量的雅思培训机构,选择一位善于启发学生思维的口语老师,先被领入门,再慢慢自我修炼。其实,只要练就多层答题思维,几乎所有考生都可以得到6.5的分数。

7、99%的考生,因"不敢提问"被扣分

根据笔者给学生做模拟的经验,有超过50%的考生,在考试的时候会对某个或某几个问题不甚了解。在听不懂题目的时候,绝大同学采取的策略是:一猜二蒙!

当你猜测或蒙的时候,你在对考题的理解能力、表述自己观点的能力会严重丢分。如果你放松地、大胆地问考官,你压根不会被扣分。即便考官解释之后你要求他再次解释,你也仅仅可能因为"理解能力"而被扣个微乎其微的0.05分,而绝对不会因"听不懂"、"答跑题"收到双重重罚。

8、99%的考生,因"哑巴思维"被严重扣分

笔者在模拟面试中,最痛苦的地方,不是听到了中国考生的哑巴英语(论坛),而是直面"哑巴思维",这是中国学生雅思口语均分全球倒数第一的根本症结,其严重程度,远超刚才所讲的其他问题的总和。

舌头"会被扣分,为什么坚持"不伸舌头"?

如果考生找借口说:"我习惯不伸舌头啦",那考官会说:"向至少0.2分说再见吧!"

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